※ 引述《mason (牲牲不息)》之铭言： : : 1. A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to : : protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? : : Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. : If I'm the chairman of a well financial affair company, I'll like to do ^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^ 假设语气 If I were..., I would... "a well financial affair company" 是指财务状况良好的公司吗? 可以说 "a financially well company" (adv.) (adj.) (n.) : something green to our living environment. Because I think the arts xxxxxxx : is base on clean and healthy background, which the improvement of based ^a and improving the environment : environment can support it, too. : : By the way, I'm the one who can't understand well in arts, although I xxx : can't imagine the amount of population who will appreciate about arts, people would xxxxx^the : but I think nobody will refuse to stay in a comfortable environment. would : So, I thought that is a way to complete in both respect if a company is think ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : going to invest a good environment. For example, in the busy traffic ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 这句感觉不太通顺，请问是说，投资在改善环境上可以一举两得吗? : system of taipei, the driver will not feel like watching some art xxxxxx T ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 许多驾驶并不会不愿意见到路上美术装饰吧，但也许他们比较希望看到树。 Suggestion: "The driver would rather see a woody cover of trees instead of art and sculptures." : sculpture but a woody cover of tree. Don't you agree? : -- : The question never said that I'm a chairman, but I'm really don't know : how to get a start sentence. Is it diverge from the topic? I think it's fine. The most plain and standard way would be to simply start with: "I think the company should choose to protect the environment." : My english is quite poor and this is my first article in ST_english, : I hope that teacher will give me a lot of advice, thank you very much^^. It's a nice article! It seems like you write with confidence and don't try to get too much ahead of yourself. Good job! -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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