作者ideos (桤)
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标题[写作班]托福第十周 ideos-2
时间Tue May 13 04:10:58 2008
2. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work
for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific examples
or details to support your choice.
Working is one of the important things in our life. Nowadays, more and more
people emphasize their living quality, thus what kind of works people choose
may bring a huge impact. Some people work for living, others live for working.
It doesn’t matter good or worth, but personal preference.
Until now, I have no experience about working. In my future plan, I would like
work for a large company first. I think working in a large company could help
young men, someone likes me, to familiarize office atmosphere and adjust living
rhythm. If I made a big fortune, I will create my own business, a small company
. Different plan for two stages of my life is the best choice for me.
好久没写作文了
本来就对作文苦手
现在感觉差更多
请用力的帮我订正
非常感谢!!!
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1F:推 baris:格式有点怪,起承转合写3-4段吧? 05/13 18:17
2F:→ ideos:有说可以写50-100的短文啊 05/14 00:22