作者dvlin (Dee)
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标题Re: [写作班] 托福第7周 kapolo,2
时间Fri Apr 11 11:02:13 2008
※ 引述《kapolo (肤浅国度)》之铭言:
: : 2. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to
: : save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and
: : examples to support your opinion.
: Because of currency is one of the most important materials for living, how
xx
: to perfectly manage the money we earn being more meaningful. We not only need
^^^^^is
: to save our dollar for the unknown future, but also have to spend our cash
: for some entertainment. Both of the ways to handle our money are needed.
: We should keep our money for any possible accident as animals preparing foods
prepare
: for the harsh day. When the winter comes, no body can live without the
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nobody ^^^
*Consider revising
e.g., "for harsh days"
: saving. People have to prepare for the next great depression.
^^^^^^ savings? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
*
*Predicting another "great depression" in the future is very bold.
Perhaps it's better to just say a "recession" or an "economic downturn"?
: However, we should saving money not only for the hard time, but also for the
save xxx
: future goals. If we plan to traveling all over the world or buying everything
travel to buy
: we like. We need to save our money for these plans. We can not reaching our
, we reach
: goals by running out of the money just after we earn it.
if we spend all the money...
: In conclusion, we should save our money for the future. We will like our life
: by doing the right decision; we can enjoy the future rather than worry it.
worry about it.
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1F:推 kapolo:谢谢板主dvlin ^~^y 04/12 13:55