※ 引述《kapolo (肤浅国度)》之铭言： : ※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之铭言： : : 五个题目选一个写即可喔！ : : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should : : sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific : : reasons and examples to support your answer. : Now is the rushing busy society. People are not sometimes but always doing ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^* "a rushing busy society" is not a common usage, but "a rushing society" is. Also, "now" is a time, but "society" is a place. Suggestion: "We are living in a rushing society." : the things they do not enjoy doing. Common people have to work all day for : salary, teenagers have to study for future work. No doubt most of us do *Okay, but are you implying that no one enjoys working, and no student enjoys studying? : things that we don't enjoy doing frequently. Should we do anymore that we : dislike? : We are struggling hardly for our need in the most time. Although someone hard* most of the time *"Hard" is both an adjective and an adverb. The adverb "hardly" has the almost opposite meaning of "hard". : may argue that his working is meaningful, we still have to pay the ^^^^^^^ : responsibility, tension, and attention at work. Maybe we can enjoy at work. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *Watch for correct verb/noun usage. "pay" attention, "hold" responsibility, "hold" or "endure" tension. : But we can not enjoy by work. We would choose another exercise if we can ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *This is quite a narrow-minded opinion. : relive from the bills. be relieved from : Students are in the society opinion that is studying for entering a higher : school. Students' badly competition for enter the top school makes them : studying day and night. I don't suspect they will enjoy learning with : pressure. *There are several grammar problems in this paragraph. Let me try to rewrite it, and tell me what you think. "Students in our society today are of the opinion that studying is only for entering a better school. Fierce competition makes them study day and night. I don't think they enjoy learning under so much pressure." : In conclusion, human have already spend too much time on making material "humans" spent xx or "human beings" : contentment, doing too many things we hate. People should sometimes do : things that they do enjoy doing rather than not. 有一点我想提出来跟你讨论一下。 这个题目里的statement是 "People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing." 言下之意，预设的立场是，除了「有时候」以外的时间，应该都在做自己喜欢的事， 而议题是「是不是也应该/必须做些自己不喜欢的事？」 然而，你的个人立场似乎是说，无论如何，人们「总是」在做自己「不喜欢」的事， 但是「有时候」也该做些自己喜欢的事？ -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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