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各位版友好: 最近在写一份投到国外研讨会的proposal(500字底线)。由於国内研讨会要的通常 是summary,所以我就以sumaary的形式写了一份proposal(不知道这样写会不会非常奇怪 >_<)。恳请版友们赐教,文法、句子流畅性、专业用语等等都欢迎,很希望能获得这次 的发表机会,有机会去看看外面的世界。 感恩感恩!! Proposal The purpose of this study is to investigate how service learning programs work at Brigham Young University (BYU) —a representative of sectarian communitarian character education. Since character education within the higher education stage in Taiwan is not promoted broadly, BYU, which is known for its service learning, can be a good exemplar for universities in Taiwan. Four main points are discussed in this paper. First, based on Robert J. Nash’s classifications of three communitarianisms, post-liberal, civic-liberal and sectarian, the author further discusses character education from a sectarian communitarian perspective, especially emphasis on the educational spirits of a sectarian college. That is, a sectarian college, such as BYU, is regarded as a community , which should be a civic educational space and service learning is the most practical way to glorify God and promote citizenship. Furthermore, the author investigates the Center for Service and Learning (CSL) at BYU, which functions as a central system that provides meaningful service opportunities for BYU students. This Center is guided by five principles: safety, respect, reflection , selflessness, and meaning. Main programs include community service projects, tutoring training, service certification projects, and student service council. Programs are based on student–volunteers and an atmosphere of service and learning. In Taiwan, compared to public colleges, service learning in sectarian colleges is more active because of the secular spirits of religion. Nevertheless, both public and sectarian colleges define service learning programs as required classes which focus on “laboring” while “learning” and “volunteering” are not manifested in depth. On the other hand, most sectarian colleges are lack of an administrative institute, to make an overall plan of service learning issues and provide necessary assistances for voluntary undergraduates and teachers with interests. According to the discussion above, three suggestions are provided for service learning of sectarian colleges in Taiwan. First, university authorities can develop a central institute to coordinate all service and learning programs, including serving activities of student associations, classes required by professional courses, and tutor training. Second, service combined with students’ major learning would be an effective way for students to practice their professional knowledge and develop voluntariness at the same time. University authorities can encourage academicians to offer elective professional course inclusive of service. In addition, to strengthen the atmosphere of service in campus, university authorities can provide both teachers and students courses of professional service development, such as leadership programs, philosophy of service and so on. Finally, the establishment of service certification system may be an appropriate way to strengthen the sense of voluntary service among undergraduates. However, this kind of system should be constructed under a totally voluntary base without pressure from others. --



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1F:推 mingtai1:大多很OK. 唯一看起来较不习惯的是以However做结尾. 03/18 00:40
2F:推 mingtai1:还有很细微的地方,就是关系代名词最好紧接欲修饰的名词 03/18 00:49
3F:推 mingtai1:Center for Service and Learning (CSL) at BYU, which.. 03/18 00:55
4F:→ mingtai1:which应该是指center.是我的话我会..BYU. It functions.. 03/18 00:56
5F:推 dvlin:I totally agree with what mingtai said about "However". 03/18 03:17
6F:推 dvlin:It almost sounds like you've written the whole article 03/18 03:17
7F:推 dvlin:only to reject all of it in the end. 03/18 03:18
8F:推 dvlin:(I know that's true.) 03/18 03:19
9F:推 dvlin:I think that sentence would work even without "However". 03/18 03:19
10F:推 dvlin:糟糕 上上句是 (I know that's NOT true.) 才对orz打太快 03/18 03:57
11F:→ november22:非常感谢..我会把最後一句改掉的..^__^ 03/18 22:57







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