略改一点点 ※ 引述《kfsfat (kfsfat)》之铭言： : 太久没写了，真是太惭愧了。po上这篇文章给大家讨论讨论。 : 感谢罗。 : Nowadays, university has no longer been a fresh word since students took take : university (degree) as their basic (fundamental) diploma. According to my ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^ A degree and a diploma are two different things! 建议这一句重新改写. 也许你想表达的是 "Students take undergraduate studies as their foundation of knowledge." 或其他? : personal experience, I strongly believe people should attend collage. college : Becaus college is a place that students can learn more new knowledge and where : social experience. : ps:1.上面第一个括号是想问说省略比较好还是写出来比较好? : 2.第二个括号是想问说用basic 还是用fundamental比较好? : First, university is definitely a best learning environment as well as a the : place which is full of professional courses one prefers. There are a variety : of subjects you can choice such as mechanical engineering, chemical choose : engineering and so on. There are also many professors with abundant teaching , : experience which can help students to solve the problems in their studies. who xxx : With teachers' help, students can learn lots of useful basic and professional ^the : skills which are very helpful to their future career. : Second, university is also a spot for everyone to interact with people of : different backgrounds. For example, some of students perhaps determine to xx ^^^^^^^^^ how about "would like"? : attend school clubs. Here, you can get in touch with many friends, and also : learn how to accomplish an activity with suggestions and help of others. : During this period of time, it is a good chance for students to realize how learn? : to cooperate with one another. : All in all, students not only can be well-educated here, but also can learn ^can xxx ^^建议用become xxx 这样会好读一点 : how important the social experience is. Last but not least, everyone has his : or her own purpose of attending university; however, here is absolutely a the : perfect place for students to fulfill their will. --

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