: Some suggestions : 1.Use coherent tenses in the related sentences. If you are not sure which : tense should be used, just use the present tense. Use the past tense only : when it's really necessary. : 2.If you are not sure if you use a certain word correctly, Look it up in : the dictionary or google it to find some examples. : 3.Read more materials and recite the examplary sentences. Try to imitate : them when writing. : 4.I just correct some obvious errors. I suggest you rewrite a new one. : Maybe somebody else can help you more. 谢谢您的建议 其实我也在想要不要先暂停一下这边的写作 因为我觉得我跟版友们的程度落差不小 = = 有点像小学生去大学作文课捣乱 这样其实是有点浪费大家的时间 但我又觉得不自己写出来 真的是只会觉得别人写的都很好 其实自己的感受不太大 好像只有自己错过几次才能真正学会一点 不知道各位前辈能给我什麽建议 还是有甚麽相关的书可能对我有帮助的 或许可以从我错的地方看出一点端倪 而给我一点接下来的建议 先再次谢谢各位前辈啦 ^^ --

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