※ 引述《corson (浪人剑客)》之铭言： : I do not have any strong, positive or negative answer : for this actually. However, my first impression was : the disappearance of expectation to Chinese New Year of the (Lunar) Replacing chinese to lunar is just suggested The article "the" is usually not omitted here. : when I saw the question. I heard that people were very XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXX : expected the coming of Chinese New Year. Many good foods people were very expected the coming of Chinese New Year. I don't think the usage of "expected" here is appropriate. If something is expected, people expect it. I suggect you use this sentence. "People looked forward to the coming of the Lunar New Year in the past." : cannot be supplied in usual days due to the poverty of : farm. Everyone will expect the New Year because they can XXXXX expected could : eat delicious foods like chicken or pork. Nowadays, I : feel that the Chinese New Year atmosphere gradually : decayed with the convenience getting of foods. in XX : Our life has become very different than before. from it was : The world mainly became an industrial and commercial : community, so the food also became easier to prepare XXX : for convenience. Microwave oven can help us to eat XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX : the hot and delicious foods even in midnight. XXX : Instant noodles can be a best solution when you is the : had no time to get a meal outside the room. However, have XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX : I have to ask: do we need the kind of life? Although this : I do not have the standpoint to opposite getting the : food easily because I still loved the McDonald’s love : or walked to 7-11 to buy a battle of red tea, I want walk : to ask: who give us this desire? It is like a globalized : conspiracy. : I was looked like a double-faced person. XXX XX X S+ look/sound/feel like+ n S+ look/sound/feel + adj These are the common usage. : I criticized the fast foods but got their advantages X : at same time. When we eliminated the poverty, : we also eliminated some tradition unknowingly. traditionsXXXXXXXXXXX : I do not know whether it is good, and I think : that is the problem. : 又要有劳大家了 我知道还是写的很烂 但自己又很难知道怎麽改 : 只觉得有些地方就是怪怪的 希望这样写方向没有错才好 : 谢谢各位罗 Some suggestions 1.Use coherent tenses in the related sentences. If you are not sure which tense should be used, just use the present tense. Use the past tense only when it's really necessary. 2.If you are not sure if you use a certain word correctly, Look it up in the dictionary or google it to find some examples. 3.Read more materials and recite the examplary sentences. Try to imitate them when writing. 4.I just correct some obvious errors. I suggest you rewrite a new one. Maybe somebody else can help you more. --

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