作者effervescenc (Waltz of Flowers)
看板ST-English
标题[写作班] 托福第一周 5
时间Sun Feb 3 10:15:36 2008
It is no doubt that if a factory built in my
community, the residents there can have more opportunity to find a job.
Nevertheless, I am definitely opposed to this prosopal with the
following reasons. They are inflation, traffic problems and
environment destruction.
First, if a new factory is built near my community, not only the
residents live here will work in the new company but also people who
originally live in other citys or countries will join in.
If this happend,the consumption of food, dormitory and many kinds
of commodities would highly rise. So the inflation problems will happen,
people need to spend more much money to buy the same goods compare to other
communities.
Second, the number of residents will grow deeply. The number of
automobiles will also proportional to the new number of residents.
What results is it becomes harder to move on the roads and streets and
children face more danger from the road home to school.
Last but not least, the polution made from the new factory will danger
our health.The reivers will be polluted by the waste water, and some kind
of heavy metals will make big influence to our bodies. Trees and animals
will in danger of extinction, and we will no longer have a nice place outdoors
to play and joy.
For these reasons, I am personally oppsoed this project of building
a new factory near my community. To have a good living environment
and good health is more important.
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3F:→ effervescenc:thanks 02/04 09:00
4F:推 jennyQ:have more opportunities 应该用复数吧? 02/05 00:14
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6F:推 jennyQ:对了 还有compare with 用法跟compare to不同,就这些^.^ 02/05 00:19
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