作者mingtai1 (snake)
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标题Re: [写作班] corson - Biography
时间Tue Jan 15 11:45:04 2008
※ 引述《corson (浪人剑客)》之铭言:
: Let me introduce the biography about Newton (1643-1727), the grandest
: scientist in the 17 century.
: Newton was born in a remote village, and his family was not very rich.
: This point also affected his college life. He had to be a assistant of
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^这也有点中式英文 ^^an
可以写Therefore, Hence连接前因後果就行了.
: professor, and learn many things. Newton was not very special in his
^^^^^^^^^ ^^ed
这里你要指明限定某些教授his/the professor(s)或是不限定(professors)
: boyhood days, but he was interested in unknown.
boyhood就可以指童年 unknowns
: Newton entered Cambridge Unverisity, and met a good teacher who affectd
: Newton in science and philosophy. Newton had studied the light structure
: by prism after graduating. He was back to his country because of the
: plague. He thought the calculus, gravity and optic in this period.
: Newton wrote some books, and the famous one, Principle, described the
: law of motion. This achievement affects the later several hundred-year
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This books had affected the development of science for the following several
hundred years
: science. Netwon was also a inventor, and he inventor reflective telescope
^^an invented
: by his understanding of optic.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 这句感觉有点多余.
: In my option, Newton's law of motion represents a predictable world concept.
: That indeed conflicts with the later quantum mechanics. Overall, Netwon
: owned multiple identity, scientist, mathematician, and philosopher.
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中式英文. Identity是身份;而且和此要表达的意义不合.你可以考虑用Multidimensional
: No doubt he was all excellent in these fields. His achievement is much
excellent in all these fields.
: more than I can describe.
: I found some information about Newton in internet, and revise it.
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: Please give me some comments for this. Thank you.
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1F:推 corson:thank you.. ^^ .. 01/15 15:42