作者iris0542 (gg)
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标题Re: [写作班] Christmas / Physheepy
时间Sun Dec 23 19:14:04 2007
※ 引述《physheepy ()》之铭言:
: When it comes to Christmas, we think about gifts, glittery decorations,
: and riotous parties. People enjoy themselves on their Christmas vacation. They
: go to concert or party in fancy dress. They enjoy an extravagant big meal.
ocncerts parties dresses
: They buy expensive presents and cards to friends and family members. They say
: "Merry Christmas and Happy New year." as greetings. Everything seems joyful
我不知道这边的标点符号这样用行不行ㄝ~~
感觉上直接删掉"和. 比较安全..麻烦知道的人提供一下意见
: because a whole new year is coming.
: However, not all people can have a merry Christmas.When we are planning
: the activities for Christmas celebration, many people, especially in the
: undeveloped countries, are suffering and struggling for just living. When
: we are over-full and throw away the surplus food into trash cans, there
X
: are many people dying of starvation and illness. What a big contrast it is!
: I don't mean to dampen anybody's joy at this important festival. We are
: busy in hard-working for the whole year and it's a good time to take a break
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: with family. However, I think we should keep in mind that we are the lucky
^our luckiest
: ones. Not all people have the rights to enjoy at Christmas. We should be
: grateful for our fortune and treasure what we own. If you have the ability and
that X
: opportunity, try to help the unfortunate people. Share the happiness and bring
: merry Christmas to them --just like what Santa Clause do. I think it will
Claus does
: take more joys to you than just a big meal or a party.
bring joy我想应该是不可数的
Your wirting skill is quite high! I am expecting your next article.^^
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1F:推 djnospam:Year(Y大写)後面的句号要删掉 12/24 01:51
2F:推 physheepy:Thank you! I made some very silly mistakes :) 12/24 02:32
3F:推 physheepy:I check the definition in the Longman dictionary. 12/24 02:38
4F:→ physheepy:It says "dress" is an uncountable noun when it 12/24 02:42
5F:→ physheepy:refers to clothes for men of a particular type 12/24 02:44
6F:→ physheepy:So I use "dress" here instead of "dresses" 12/24 02:46
7F:→ physheepy:I'm a little confused. Maybe we can have further 12/24 02:48
8F:→ physheepy:discussions about it. 12/24 02:49