作者azure0116 (冲阿.炫风冲峰)
看板ST-English
标题[写作班]azure0116, Christmas
时间Sat Dec 22 00:14:23 2007
I began to remember the old memory about my first love.
Acctually she didnt love me as I love her. Like my father said,"
the things in the world you can't acquire always tempt you
most."I guess it's a kind of the human natures.
In 2000, December 24, I was the second grade of my
junior high school. There's a beautiful girl sat in front of
me,I having been caring for her for months. Since December 24
was the last chace for me to ask her out, I decided that I must
try my atmost to ask for dating her. At the moon break finally I
courageously asked her out. She accept my invitation. At the
moment I felt an overwhelming joy first appeared in my life.
We met at the Taipei MRT station first. I took her to my
favorite restaurant. Then we went to 淡水 to enjoy the beauteos
sunset. I really knew of your kindness because seeing you bought
a 爱心铅笔. We had a good time at that day. When I said good bye
to her in my mind I decided to ask her out again, fantasizing
that in the process of time we may become a couple.
Unluckily, fortune doesnt smiles on me. She didnt care for me
as I did. We could only be friend. The thing intenses my
suffering was our photographic momery on Cristmas.
Although many years passed by, I still missed the girl.
I was ambivalent about a loveless lover on every
Christmas,missing her terribly, remembering her cruelty,
thinking about that she flashed the first smile at me in my
life.
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以下为疑惑^^
有些逗号+动名词是用分词构句@@ 不知道用的对不对!
(约xxx出来只能用 ask XX out 吗?)
爱心铅笔不知道怎麽拼 (那种台北车站附近路上一直叫你买的)
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