作者mph (梦白)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班第五周]台风-mingtai
时间Sun Dec 9 11:33:58 2007
就我知道的跟大家讨论。
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之铭言:
: Typhoons, which are usually formed in summer and autumn, are typical natural
: disasters that strike Taiwan about 5 times in average every year. Unlike
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strike用的很好,补充我们还常用 impact, punch, damage 或是可以用 sweep
都可以有"重创"的意涵。
: tornados or hurricanes which cause disasters mainly by their strong wind,
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其实 hurricane = typhoone 只是发展地区不同,就学理而言是同一种天气系统。
如果你要比较台风的不同,这里只能用 tornado 来比。
: typhoons usually carry a huge amount of water onto the land, sometimes
huge 感觉比较口语,我会用下列替代:
1) 大的意思:
large, great, enormous 等...
2) 丰盛,丰富的意思:
rich, abundant, profuse, plentiful 等...
通常我们会说台风降雨充沛,所以第一次提到降雨我会用第二类的字,比较精准。
之後描述因为字词的替换,描述结果图表,我可能会用第一类的字词。
amount of water onto the land
我们用 landfall
: coupled with strong wind as well. Hence, typhoons usually cause serious
: floods. Furthermore, the vegetation in Taiwan is not protected well and
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well protected 不知道会不会比较好。
: landslides are very likely to occur whenever typhoons bring much water.
植被没有妥善保护以致於土地滑动,前後有因果关系,
我会把 and 改成 ,so that
Nevertheless, typhoons can also fill up the dams so that there will
这里我不知道是台风本身填满水库,还是台风所带来的降雨填满水库,
不知道降子写行不行,有请高手能解答。
: be enough water storage for future usage. Despite of these serious issues,
: some students or office workers like strong typhoons since it is likely that
: strong wind enforce the government to announce suspension of schools and
: offices.
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1F:推 HIbaby:^_^ 12/09 11:42
2F:推 mingtai1:感谢, 果然还是很多可以改的地方 :) 12/12 22:50