作者dvlin (Dee)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班第五周]台风-mingtai
时间Wed Dec 5 00:46:11 2007
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之铭言:
: Typhoons, which are usually formed in summer and autumn, are typical natural
: disasters that strike Taiwan about 5 times in average every year. Unlike
: tornados or hurricanes which cause disasters mainly by their strong wind,
^, with winds
我想这里应该要用with,
by常用在被动句
example:
If something was done by hand, someone did it with his or her hands.
: typhoons usually carry a huge amount of water onto the land, sometimes
: coupled with strong wind as well. Hence, typhoons usually cause serious
: floods. Furthermore, the vegetation in Taiwan is not protected well and
: landslides are very likely to occur whenever typhoons bring much
: water.
: Nevertheless, typhoons can also fill up the dams so that there will
: be enough water storage for future usage. Despite of these serious issues,
xx
前几篇Hibaby写到的方法(跳跃式思考那串),用条列式再更改顺序,在这里就很有用。
这边既然写说 "[Despite] these serious issues..."
那麽在这一句之前应该都是负面的影响。
所以 "Nevertheless, typhoons can also fill up the dams..." 应该挪到後面。
: some students or office workers like strong typhoons since it is likely that
: strong wind enforce the government to announce suspension of schools and
^^^^^^^
另一位板友的文章中也出现过enforce的错误用法,这似乎是个挺普遍的错误。
enforce是"执法"的"执",进行enforce这个动作的人或物是the government,受词是事
example:
The government enforces the law.
The government enforces freedom of speech.
The govenrment enforces the suspension of schools.
不用在法律方面的时候,规则还是一样
example:
I enforce my rights as a citizen.
The Visual Basic compiler enforces explicit variable declaration.
: offices.
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1F:推 mingtai1:我又把force, enforce搞混了Orz 感谢指正~~ :D 12/06 01:17