※ 引述《sakuravita ()》之铭言： : : have acquaintance with a field of skill, we need to retrieve its source. It ^^^^ ^^^ a skill in certain field? source 是指？ : helps us to be more familiar with the usage of words, such as collocation. In : the meantime, reading can also increase our lexicon, which is useful in ^^^^似乎没有时间关系 ^^^^^ enrich? 用 In addition 会不会比较好？ : writing. If one has a fundamental background of reading, one can writes ^^^ ^^ in 要 proficient writing, strong background 也许比较够 : proficiently. : Therefore, my plan of improving English writing is as follows: first, : reading reference books of writing, such as Style, Line by Line; and also ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^sentence pattern reference book 比较像是字典之类的工具书, 不太适合用读的 : research guiding books, such as Writing Research Paper, MLA Handbook. These ^, and : books offer me a direction how to write a good composition; and most important ^^direction of ^^^composition 不可数 : of all, how to write a better thesis. Second, writing as possible as : I can. I joined the writing group on BBS, and also audited a writing class in ^^also 可省略 : campus. In these participations, I can push myself to write. Moreover, there ^^^ participation 不可数，用 By making these efforts 如何呢？ : there are professionals, teacher and peers to cooperate with. In their assistance ^^^^^there 是指？ : In their assistance and guidance, I can no more be blind to my own mistakes of writing. ^^with ^^about : （请多多指教，谢谢！） 从整体来看， 在第一段的第一句，你点出了你的写作计画有读跟写两个部分。下一句如果能承接 说明计画中读跟写该如何相辅相成，把计画的架构勾勒出来，会方便下一段进一步 描述计画细节。 我觉得你第一句以後有点不是在说明计画，反而在解释为什麽要先读再写了。 给你参考，祝你计画成功 --

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