※ 引述《HIbaby (燃烧吧! 嗨~北鼻!)》之铭言： : 迟交了 不好意思 : 请大家给我点意见 谢谢 m(_ _)m : A plan for new boards in PTT : Aim : Fields in disease and drug mechanism are important for people : major in life science. However, such kinds of discussion place : are not popular on internet with Chinese language interface. Thus, : establishing Pathology and Drug boards in PTT is a way to improve : interaction of PTT users in biological and medical fields. 个人浅见: 第一句我个人感觉会有点offensive 因为对於研究其他领域的人来说 并不认为疾病与药物机转很重要 可能DNA的转录才是王道 所以建议改成 Disease and drug mechanism is now an important field in life science. 建议多一句叙述为何这部分必须从一般的生命科学类分开 This area incorporates current knowledges of disease in biology, the production of drug in chemistry, and the prognosis of disease after the treatment of drug in clinical medicine and research. 然後第二句和第三句可以合并成正面的句子 然後最好不要预设看板使用者是哪个类群的人 Establishing an independent board with Chinese language interface in PTT will encourage discussions among the users who are interested in this field. : Methods : Boards establishing : 40 people with 200 times logging and publishing in PTT are : required for cosigning a new board. USER-SEARCHING function of : PTT is used for finding the people with qualification. In addition, : mailing to my friends is another choice for cosigning new boards. 每一句的第一个字不可以写阿拉伯数字 BBS上用的应该是"post" 另外易混淆的是200次指的是loggin加posting 还是各200次还是单指logging? 另外个人连署的条件为什麽会要包含40个人? 这些都是第一句的问题 所以建议改为 Fourty people are required to cosign a new board. Individual who has logged in more than 200 times and posted more than once is eligible to cosign. 下面的只是个人看法 USER-SEARCH function of PTT will be used to qualify the cosigners. In addition, my qualified friends will be invited to cosign the new board. : Inviting administrator for new boards : Enthusiasm of administrators is a key of success in boards managing, : even exceed in professional character. Activate users in Biotech-board : or other boards as a human source for administrators. 最大问题在第一句与第二句没有看到必然的关联性 就是生物科技版的使用者跟版主的热情和版面经营之间的关联在哪? 另外活跃的使用者就真的会热心的经营版面吗?这之间的逻辑关系还不够强 The key of success in board managing is the enthusiasm of the administrator rather than his professionalism. Active and responsible users in the Biotech or other boards are the candidates for the administrator. 请大家多切磋罗 --

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