: A plan for new boards in PTT 标题的写法：所有的字第一个字母大写，冠词跟介系词除外。 所以标题会变成： A Plan for New Boards in PTT : Aim : Fields in disease and drug mechanism are important for people 1. 主词的写法有点怪，我会写成： The fields of mechanisms of diseases and drugs 可是看了後文，你的field要表达的似乎不是领域，而是空间？ 那最好再换种说法。 2. 主修生命科学的人可以直接称为life science majors : major in life science. However, such kinds of discussion place ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 是要说：「这类的讨论空间」吗？ such places for duscussion如何？ 其实space说不定更好。 : are not popular on internet with Chinese language interface. Thus, 1.internet最好用 the Internet 2. with Chinese...放到後面，变成修饰Internet， 而不是你想说的讨论空间了。这句可能得整句改动。例如 Such spaces for discussion-- with Chinese language interfaces-- are not popular on the Internet. : establishing Pathology and Drug boards in PTT is a way to improve : interaction of PTT users in biological and medical fields. 1.因前面两句都是现在式，所以我会建议这句的is a way...改成 can be a way... 毕竟这件事还没做，无法确定到底会不会成功。 2.interaction"s" "among" 会更精确。後面这句这样写会更漂亮； ...can be a way of improving interactions among PTT users from the fields of biology or medicine. : Methods : Boards establishing : 40 people with 200 times logging and publishing in PTT are : required for cosigning a new board. USER-SEARCHING function of 1. people建议改为users。 2. publishing? 你要说的是posts吗？发文？ 3. 句型建议改一下： A new board requires 40 cosigners, who have logged in 200 times... : PTT is used for finding the people with qualification. In addition, ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ qulified users就可以了 : mailing to my friends is another choice for cosigning new boards. ^^^前面都没有出现I，这里最好还是保持第三人称。 另外，後面其实可以这样说： ... is another choice for encouraging the consigning of a new board. : Inviting administrator for new boards : Enthusiasm of administrators is a key of success in boards managing, : even exceed in professional character. Activate users in Biotech-board 你是要说：甚至超过专业背景吗？ 我会建议说：which is even more important than their professionalism : or other boards as a human source for administrators. 1.Activave users? 是不是可以直接说Active users？ 2.第二个board可以省略。 3.这句没动词了。如果你想用activate当祈使句的动词， 建议改用encourage。不过这样，後面那个as就很怪... : Prefect : Pathology and Drug boards may give a new place to attract more people : interested in these fields, and provide more related information. 1.prefect是指？我一直想到Harry Potter里面的prefect XD 2.这里的give是指？或者是直接说：can be a new place? 请参考:) --

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