作者brendonfish (fish)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班]第二周 找工作计画 mingtai1
时间Fri Nov 2 16:41:45 2007
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之铭言:
: I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation
: two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write
^^^^^^^^^这里使用 sometimes,
会让我联想到其他时候你的工作是?
建议写成 My major is computer science,
therefore I write customized application software
after school.
: applications according to customers' demands. During these days,
: I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized
这样写如何呢? a person with only one skill is not competitive, and ...
建议把这句断开,然後重新选择连接词让语意连贯。
: the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned
^. Therefore,
: English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in
^^^^^^^^^ such that
: foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities
^. Then I have the opportunities ...
: to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ and visit ...
: around the world.
个人意见,
给你参考。
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