※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之铭言： : I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation : two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write ^^^^^^^^^这里使用 sometimes, 会让我联想到其他时候你的工作是？ 建议写成 My major is computer science, therefore I write customized application software after school. : applications according to customers' demands. During these days, : I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized 这样写如何呢？ a person with only one skill is not competitive, and ... 建议把这句断开，然後重新选择连接词让语意连贯。 : the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned ^. Therefore, : English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in ^^^^^^^^^ such that : foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities ^. Then I have the opportunities ... : to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ and visit ... : around the world. 个人意见， 给你参考。 --

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