※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之铭言： : I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation : two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write : applications according to customers' demands. During these days, : I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized : the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned 1.两个"I realized"重复了，可以省掉一个， 後面一句直接用"and that"，连the fact都可以不用。 2.forever好像太强了，long-term、lifelong、long-lasting如何？ : English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in ^^^这里改用逗点 ^^这里加逗点。 : foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities ^^^^去掉这个and另起一句 : to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots ^^要加逗点 : around the world. 请参考:) --

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