作者chileno (月月)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班]第二周 找工作计划 nanochen
时间Sat Oct 27 10:02:24 2007
※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之铭言：
: My plan for finding a job
: I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to
^^^正式一点的文件建议用 fifth
: graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job.
: Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am
1.你想表达的是Even though吧？
2.interview当主动型态的时候，表示你是主考官。
而且用了already，时态上最好是完成式。
所以建议改为
Even though I have already been interviewed for several jobs..
: still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in
: a university after graduation.
: I would like to go to some areas which are different from
^^ explore更好 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ apart from 即可
: what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be
^^^^^^这是硕论，博论多用dissertation
: advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining
: a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me.
^^^^^ What kind of group? Commercial, technological, or academic?
: The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for
: the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks.
^^^^^^ 这是指表达能力吗？
or communication skills?
: Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get
^^^^^^^^^^ 可用 insufficient
: an ideal position.
前面几位版友的建议没错，有些地方确实可以写得更明确一些。
有时只要加上一两个形容词就可以达成的:)
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1F：推 nanochen:感谢指导..我突然发现我到目前其实还搞不太懂even跟 10/27 10:45
2F：→ nanochen:even though 用法的差别..两个都是加子句? 10/27 10:46
3F：推 nanochen:倒数第三句的talk是指有关自己研究的报告.. 10/27 10:52
4F：→ nanochen:通常会去学校的一些研究组里给一个报告 当作面试 10/27 10:53
5F：推 chileno:even是副词，even though=though，是连接词 10/27 13:44