作者november22 (小马儿要美梦成真^Q^)
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标题Re: [写作班]第二周 找工作计划 nanochen
时间Fri Oct 26 12:33:11 2007
※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之铭言:
: My plan for finding a job
---Your background---
: I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to
: graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job.
---Your expectation for a job
: Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am
: still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in
: a university after graduation.
: I would like to go to some areas which are different from
^^^^^^^^^^ what areas? please be more specific..
: what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be
: advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
again. plz specify "what"do you do now
and plan to do "what" in the future
so that's why you have to make "what" plan
: a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me.
--Your plan for a job---
: The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for
: the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks.
^^^^^^^^ what talk?
: Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Time is fleeting so I need to arrange my time more effetviely.
: an ideal position.
Chinese in the following:
亲爱的版友你好:
以下是小小建议,仅供参考。
这篇作文的文法与文字都很流畅,
但是读不出明确的"计画细节"是什麽,以及"为何"要做这些计画
My "plan" for finding a "job"
你想要的找的"job"是什麽呢? 可以提供更多细节吗?
为了找这份工作要如何"finding"?
而你为了找到这个"job"所需要做的"plan"又是什麽呢?
除了1. CV ,2. recommendation letter ,3.talk (什麽talk?工作的沟通能力吗?)
还有其他吗?
这个部分会是这篇文章最主要的重点,请多加描述。
大家好认真学英文~
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※ 编辑: november22 来自: 218.171.138.49 (10/26 12:36)
1F:推 cakotay:plz specify to "what" you do now 这句话有点问题... 10/26 22:57
※ 编辑: november22 来自: 218.171.138.49 (10/26 23:53)
2F:推 november22:谢谢指证~我自己也觉得怪怪的~动词後面用的不太对^^" 10/26 23:54
3F:推 nanochen:非常感谢...自己想想的确有蛮多地方不太清楚的 10/27 10:39