toilet paper Several materials - such as leaves, cloth or kraft paper- provide perseonal cleaning in bathroom. Kraft paper have a benefit character, that is cheap. However, the sense of touch and the ability of water absorption is not so good. The length of fibers in paper materials determines comfortable sense of touch. Here, we developed a new kind of paper in novel structure, named as toilet paper, which are constructed by short fibers. We provide the toilet paper in schools and department stores to explore user’s feeling after use and analyze the water absorption. From the results of the questionnaires, 99% people feel good comparing to past experience. Toilet paper, which absorb water 10 times faster than kraft paper, provide a new choice for people in bathroom. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- 谢谢板上先进的改正, 整理之後. 比原本的文章好很多. 看到了自己的缺点 a. 名词当动词用. 用名词用习惯了, 混着用实在很糟糕 b. 累赘字太多, 可以合并同主词句 c. 打完文章好, 自己先检查仔细. d. 动词使用 多翻字典 注意使用法. 为了改善毛病. 整理写作班同学的文章, 边看修改处, 可以学习别人用法. 再一次道谢. 希望现在抢救英文还来得及 ^_^ -- ▏▄ BioTech 板 / 一个 Bio 研究讨论板 ▏▄ ▄ ▄ 分类看板 telnet://ptt.cc ▏▂ ▂ ▂ ▁ 国家研究院 政治,文学,学术 ▏─ ▂ ▁ 科学学术研究院 ▏─ ★BIOTECH PTT统合生命科学研究院 ▂▂▂▂▂▂▂▂▂▂ ________________________________ HiBaby --

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