作者chileno (月月)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] Glasses - yellowsky
时间Tue Oct 23 21:55:42 2007
※ 引述《yellowsky (trust myself!!)》之铭言:
: Glasses
: Glasses have become an indispensible accessories in our daily lives.
^^应用单数accessory
: Most of people used them for vision correction. One who is nearsighted
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Most people,不限定。used应改为现在式use
: can wear glasses with concave lens to make his vision clear. And one
: with far-sightedness uses glasses with convex lens for correction. Later,
: other kinds of glases, such as sunglasses or goggles, had been created to
^^^^ Typo. ^^^^^^^ 用过去式就好
: protect our eyes. They are made of specialized materials which make them
: different from ordinary glasses. There may also be some coating in the
: surface of these glasses to lessen the penetration of radiation into our
: eyes. Recently, some people, especially teenagers, use glasses as an
: accessory in their clothing. They change different glasses in different
: occasions. Glasses have become viewed as something that can show their
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 用have become就好。
: own styles.
时态的问题比较大,其他句型很棒:)
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