※ 引述《paralupi (Champs-Elysees)》之铭言： : ※ 引述《carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢￾ ￾ )》之铭言： : : I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big : [I've been work as a secretary more forty years. As a big company in the field, ^^^^^^^^^^ I've been "working" as... : the company work is always busy.] ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ the workload of the company is overwhelming. busy 当「忙碌」的意思通常比较会用来修饰「人」。 : : and busy one. In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake, : [In the beginning I was very busy and had little time for rest : due to daily heavy loaded work.] 1. little time for "a" rest. rest 是可数名词。 2. 句末建议改为heavy workload daily. 这里的daily当副词用。 因为daily、heavy、loaded一串形容词挂在work前面， 看起来有点怪。 : : because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid : "quite" a big company \ try using different : "quite" busy / words as possible! 同意，用字最好多一点变化。例如说fairly，pretty，considerably : : development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to : [Everything became a lot easier as science's rapid development and I neither ^^^^^^我会用much ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 我会用with rapid developments in science. : have to call clients nor remember everything by heart with helpful tool like ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 这里要有冠词。 : computer.] : : the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's : : schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less : [Not only I work in more efficient way with less mistakes : but also avoid unnecessary overtime working.] : : mistakes. I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention : [Therefore computer is my most favorite as the greatest invention ^^^^^ therefore是副词，这里要加逗点。 後面又用as有点怪，建议用and就好。 : on earth.] : : within a day. --

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