※ 引述《carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢￾ ￾ )》之铭言： : I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big : and busy one. "for" "My" : In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake, "break" : because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid ^^^ 这里我会建议用"in one day" 强调「一天」的意思。 : development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to : the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's "I" ^^^^^^^^^^ remeber by heart也可用memorize boss's建议用boss'即可 : schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less : mistakes. 这句用and连接，会让人意会成「我不用加班，也『不用犯比较少的错』」。 建议改为I don't...., and now I make... :I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention : within a day. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 一天内最伟大的发明？你想说的是？ 请参考罗。 --

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