作者chileno (月月)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] Computer- Carol
时间Mon Oct 22 21:41:20 2007
※ 引述《carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢 )》之铭言:
: I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big
: and busy one.
"for" "My"
: In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake,
"break"
: because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid
^^^ 这里我会建议用"in one day"
强调「一天」的意思。
: development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to
: the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's
"I" ^^^^^^^^^^
remeber by heart也可用memorize
boss's建议用boss'即可
: schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less
: mistakes.
这句用and连接,会让人意会成「我不用加班,也『不用犯比较少的错』」。
建议改为I don't...., and now I make...
:I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention
: within a day.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 一天内最伟大的发明?你想说的是?
请参考罗。
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1F:推 carol0228:谢谢 我是想说100年内 打错字了 10/22 22:12
2F:→ carol0228:谢谢你 讲得很详细 ^^ 10/22 22:13