文章架构 我采取 前言 方法 结果 讨论的方式撰写 不过好像连的不太顺 使用句子颇为单调 且很多地方觉得怪怪的 一开始我想要表达有许多材料被用於厕所中的清洁 期中的牛皮纸价格低廉 但是 触感以及吸收能力不好 所以这次提供了新的发明 也就是卫生纸 卫生纸的使用较以前优 可以提供未来一个新的选择.. 文章 -------------------------------------------------------------------- Several materials - such as leaf, cloth or kraft paper- provide for cleaning in bathroom. Kraft paper have a benefit character, cheap, however, the skin touch and the water absorb ability is not so good. The length of fibers in paper materials determined comfortable skin touch. Here, we development a novel structure style of paper, named toilet paper, which were constructed by short type fibers. We provide the toilet paper in schools and department stores to estimate using feeling from user and analysis the water absorption. From the questionary results, 99% people feel very good compared to past experience. Toilet paper can absorb water 10 times faster then kraft paper. Toilet paper may provide a new choice for people in bathroom. -------------------------------- 请各位先进提供一些建议 感谢大家. --

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