作者carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢 )
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标题[写作班] Computer- Carol
时间Mon Oct 22 13:04:59 2007
I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big
and busy one. In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake,
because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid
development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to
the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's
schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less
mistakes. I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention
within a day.
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这是我第一周的作文 请各位不吝惜地给予指教 谢谢
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