作者chileno (月月)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] BBS , smartboyjerr
时间Sun Oct 21 08:16:06 2007
补充一些。
※ 引述《dvlin ()》之铭言:
: ※ 引述《smartboyjerr ()》之铭言:
: : Bulletin Board System (BBS) is a computer system base on the Internet.
^^^^^^^^^ based on
: : One of the largest BBS and most famous one is PTT. Acorrding to PTT’s system
: ^the
这里我比较喜欢用the system record of PTT,因为's所有格的用法
比较常用在「人」身上,「事物」比较少见。
: : record, the average number of users who are online at the same time is more
: : than fourty thousands.
: sp:"forty"; thousand不用加s
「同时」还有simultaneously这个副词可以用。
: : Today, lots of students like to spend their time surfing on BBS.
: : They use BBS to as a way to communicate with others, making new friends or
: of communicating
: 跟之前一样,要用一样的词性
: So, "... communicating... making... getting..."
"They use BBS as...",这里的to不需要。
: : getting the newly information. BBS undoubtedly became an important role in our
: : daily life.
: 为了延续这个段落的时态,用"has become"比较好
补充:用has become的话,可以写成
"BBS has undoubtedly become..."或"Undoubtedly, BBS has become..."
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