作者Luge (不认识)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班-computer]
时间Fri Oct 19 14:34:25 2007
感谢C大的指教,让我多学到几招写句子的技巧
,以下还有几点疑问,想再请教 ^^
: Its powerful calculational ability help us overwhelm lots of mathemathic
: calculation, which largely speeds up the development of science and technology.
: 1. calculational ability 有点怪,可是查了一下找不到适当的词。
: 2. help应该用helps,第三人称单数。
: 3. overwhelm是「压倒、推翻」的意思,你想表达的是?
=> 我本来想表达的是克服的意思,所以以上这个字可以改成overcome吗?
: Nowadays, to open our computer and connect it with internet for referencing
: data, making friends, geting new information, or some other matters become
: a very frequent action to everyone.
: 1. to open应该改用 "turning on"
: 2. connect後面连接词应该用to 而不是with
=>这个部分我查了下字典,似乎用with较好内。
: 4. 几个动词应该统一一下全部用动名词,然後,因为有好几个动作,
: 不太适合再用a very frequent action,用复数可能比较好。
=>如果用复数要怎麽翻呢?a very frequent actions?
若把action当然不可数名词。是不是就不用修正了呢?
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