作者coolfly (如腐败入骨,如身居火宅)
看板RockMetal
标题[翻译] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane 7
时间Mon Apr 27 11:43:19 2009
7. Rope Ends
绳结注
Pain of Salvation
[注] rope end即绳索的末端,但在这段歌词中
似乎有隐喻绳索两端所打成的绳结之意,故姑译为「绳结」。
She is still young...
她年纪尚轻……
Another day of emptiness
This life is wearing her down
The room around her is a mess
Her children safe with her mom
又是空虚度日
这种生活不断消磨她
她身遭的房间一团混乱
孩子们安然跟外婆在一起
She is still young but feeling old
Two children with different fathers
She sits on the bathroom floor alone
The shower chain broke
Her neck hurts
她还年轻,但内心已老
两个孩子各有不同的爹
她独自坐在浴室地板上
莲蓬水管断裂
划伤她的颈部
Then another night of emptiness to wear her down
Naked to the world she wraps her sadness in a gown
Her children fast asleep she sears the dark with glassy eyes
Choosing carefully among her husband’s business ties
然後又是令她备感疲弱的一个空虚夜晚
赤裸面对世界,她将自己的忧伤包裹在一件睡袍中
孩子很快就睡着了,她无神的双眼洞视黑暗
慎重地在丈夫上班的领带之中挑选
“Over!” she cries through rope ends and silk ties
Beautiful life escaping her young blue eyes
But life holds her hand, refusing to let go
Leaving her breathing on the floor
「结束吧!」透过绳结和丝质领带,她哭说
美丽的生命自她年轻的碧眼中逸去
但生命掌握了她的手,拒绝撒手而逝
将她的气息留在了地面
They’re still asleep don’t hear her cry
And she’s still obsessed with rope ends
This time she picks a stronger tie
With Winnie the Pooh and friends
其他人仍在睡梦中,没听到她的哭声
她依然着迷於绳结,一心求死
这次她挑了条比较强韧的领带
上面有小熊维尼和牠的朋友们
She is still young but feeling old
A child dying to be a mother
Now she hangs from the ceiling all alone
All pressure is falling from her
她年纪尚轻,但彷佛却已苍老
成为人母扼杀了她的青春
现在她孤单地挂在天花板上
所有的压力都从身上坠落
Seeing guilt has taught her guilt she’s raised on disbelief
Merely twenty beautiful but with a taste for grief
She has learnt all that there is to know about hopelessness
Seeing that no effort in this world can stand her test
明白罪恶感只会教她更感内疚,她变得质疑一切
双十年华,美丽动人,但内心充满悲惨
早就遍嚐无助滋味
明白这世上没有任何努力能帮她撑过这试炼
“Over!” she cries through rope ends and silk ties
Beautiful life escaping her young blue eyes
And Winnie is strong, would never let her fall
Prevents her from breathing till she’s not there at all
But life holds her hands, refusing to let go
Leaving her breathing on the floor
「结束吧!」透过绳结和丝质领带,她哭说
美丽的生命自她年轻的碧眼中逸去
小熊维尼够强壮,应该不会让她掉下来
并且阻止她的呼吸,直到她完全失去意识
但生命掌握了她的手,拒绝撒手而逝
将她的气息留在了地面
Seeing guilt has taught her guilt she’s raised on disbelief
Merely twenty beautiful but with a taste for grief
She has learnt all that there is to know about helplessness
Seeing that no caring in this world can ease her stress
明白罪恶感只会教她更感内疚,她变得质疑一切
双十年华,美丽动人,但内心充满悲惨
早就遍嚐无助滋味
明白这世上没有任何关怀能减轻她的重担
Helpless she lies in rope ends and undies
Unseeing eyes fixating Eeyore’s smile
“Over!” she cries as she’s going unblind
Still in this life
Still in this troubled mind
The ceiling let go, the old house let her fall
Dropping her breathing to the hard cold floor
Hitting her head - a broken china soul
Red stains on porcelain and she’s not there at all
她无助地躺在绳结和内衣之间
暂盲的双眼注视着小驴依唷的笑容
「结束吧!」渐渐恢复视觉之时,她哭说
仍然受困此生之中
仍然受困这苦恼的心灵
天花板松了手,老旧的房子放任她跌落
将她的气息推落坚硬冰冷的地面
头部着地--一个破碎的脆弱灵魂
红色渲染上瓷砖,她完全失去意识
Breathing she cries for rope ends and silk ties
Beautiful eyes Piglet stands shy behind
Broken she lies undead and unblind
Beautiful life
Beautiful crying young eyes
Blackened and bruised, learning how to see
Staring at her tooth - crimsoned ivory
Hours they pass this broken china soul
Red stains on porcelain
And she’s not there at all
仍在呼吸,她因为绳结和丝质领带而哭泣
小猪皮杰害羞地站在她美丽眼眸後面
她躺在地面,伤而未死,也未瞎
美丽的生命
美丽的、哭泣的年轻双眼
悲伤黯淡,正在学习如何去看
随着时间不断行经这破碎的脆弱灵魂
红色渲染上瓷砖
而她再也没有意识
(高仕艳 译)
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◆ From: 118.170.72.139
1F:→ vul3G:推啦~不过rope ends我觉得上吊自杀既通俗要符合歌词 04/27 13:47
2F:推 vul3G:补推 又 04/27 14:26
3F:→ coolfly:Daniel Gildenlöw刻意用Rope Ends,应该是有这样的 04/27 18:33
4F:→ coolfly:双关意思在 不过我觉得上吊自杀还是太白了,跟整个词 04/27 18:34
5F:→ coolfly:采用的那种诗歌式的叙事风格比较难符合 04/27 18:36
6F:→ cupie:推 04/27 20:35
7F:推 afulet:这首是我整张专辑最爱的一首 原来歌词是讲这样... 04/27 22:54
※ 编辑: coolfly 来自: 118.170.71.119 (04/28 00:35)
8F:→ coolfly:发现自己漏译了两句,已补上,抱歉 04/28 00:35