看到上面一篇 ironmaiden 大大的介绍文好开心呀! 里头有介绍 Comfortably Numb 呢! 这首歌我很喜欢，但是网路上流传的翻译有点小错， 这篇之前自己翻译过文章， 本来是要等 "The Wall" 的其他歌的翻译， 不过现在是好时机，拿出来共襄盛举吧!! -------------------------------------------- Comfortably Numb 安逸的麻木 Lyrics: David Gilmour, Roger Waters. 歌曲连结: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9DqK2PkFgtw Hello. 喂! Is there anybody in there? 你还好吗? Just nod if you can hear me. 如果听到就点个头。 Is there anyone home? 你还好吧? Come on, now. 好，那麽， I hear you're feeling down. 我知道你感觉很糟， Well I can ease your pain, 嗯，我会让你不再疼痛， Get you on your feet again. 让你重新站起来。 Relax. 放轻松， I need some information first. 我需要知道点什麽， Just the basic facts: 只要知道一些事实就好了: Can you show me where it hurts? 能告诉我哪儿痛吗? There is no pain, you are receding. 没有痛楚，你的身影变得模糊， A distant ship's smoke on the horizon. 船只的烟雾飘散在遥远的地平线上， You are only coming through in waves. *1 你的身影，时而清晰，时而模糊。 *1 Your lips move but I can't hear what you're sayin'. 你嘴唇微动，我却听不清楚。 When I was a child I had a fever. 当我还是个小孩时，曾经大病一场， My hands felt just like two balloons. 双手肿的像两只气球， Now I got that feeling once again. 现在那感觉又回来了， I can't explain, you would not understand. 我无法解释，而你也不会明白， This Is not how I am. 这不是真实的自我。 I have become comfortably numb. 我迷失在安逸的麻木感中 OK. 好吧 Just a little pinprick. 来一针， There'll be no more 不会再有了 ahh! ahh! ahh! 啊! 啊! 啊! but you may feel a little sick. 但你可能会感到一点不舒服。 Can you stand up? 你还能站起来吗? I do believe It's working. Good. 我知道这效果不错，很好。 That'll keep you going for the show. 会让你能撑住整场表演的。 Come on It's time to go. *2 来吧，是时候上台了 *2 There Is no pain, you are receding. 没有痛楚，你的身影变得模糊 A distant ship's smoke on the horizon. 船只的烟雾飘散在遥远的地平线上 You are only coming through In waves. 你的身影，时而清晰，时而模糊 Your lips move but I can't hear what you're sayin'. 你嘴唇微动，我却听不清楚 when I was a child I caught a fleeting glimpse, 当我还是个小孩时，曾看过一道画面匆匆一撇 out of the corner of my eye. 在我视线所不能达到的角落 I turned to look but it was gone. 我转头寻找，但已消逝 I cannot put my finger on it now. *3 现在我也说不上来 *3 the child Is grown, the dream is gone. 那小孩长大了，梦想却破灭了 I have become comfortably numb. 我迷失在安逸的麻木感中 ==========翻译与注释========== *1 这句几乎全部的版本都翻错，come through 其实是 "出现" 的意思。 You are only coming through in waves. 意思是我一下子看的到你，一下子又看不到你了。 这句话也是歌词的一个关键，表示视觉模糊，精神恍惚， 甚至下一句还透露，连听觉也出了问题。 *2 从这句可以看出，这首歌是病人与医生的对话。 病人是位歌手，因为某些原因病的太重，精神恍惚而不能上台表演。 医生替他注射了一剂镇定剂，才得以继续演出。 有人说这是个大麻歌，甚至是海洛因歌，但我并不认为。 维基百科里的讨论、song facts网站， 都根据 Waters 的访问稿，指出这真的是感冒引起的精神恍惚。 而且，这歌是 "comfortably numb"， 不是 "comfortably high"。 说是吃毒没什麽道理。 据说，连 "手肿的像气球" ，都有人认为跟打手枪有关， 可见大家的想像力十足。 *3 can't put my fingers on something 意思当然不是手指摸不着， 而是表示不清楚，说不上来的感觉。 --

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