编译社改的是文法, 他可能无法改你表达逻辑不顺的问题. 第一句话还可以. 但第二句话没头没尾的就来个 although.... 改成 The corrosion current density Icorr is described by Arrhenius equation, Icorr=A exp.(Ea/RT), where Ea is the activation energy and A is a pre-exponential factor. We find that both A and Ea increase with increased Al content but when the temperature is higher than 27 degree, A affects the Icorr more signficantly because Al is harmful to corrosion resistance due to the inferior porous protection oxide film of Al in these alloy. (最後一句原因有更多你们发现的实验证据来帮助推论吗?有的话要写进去, 这样才显得出你们是有想过 mechanism, 而不是单纯的现象报告.) 还是对做电化学, 这件事很 trivial? ) 还有 Al is harmful to corrosion resistance 这句话是什麽意思? 整个 abstract 是真的没头没尾的. 我只是随便看一下, 我改的英文也没很好, 只是逻辑比较顺, 但我不是做这行的, 可能会有误解. ※ 引述《cssula ( )》之铭言： : 在经过上次被骂破英文後, 找过系上另一个老师帮忙看过, 老师也觉得应该ok後再投. 结 : 过这次回来後评语如下: : The standard of English is still not good enough throughout the paper. The poor : English starts already in the Abstract, Last time I suggested you show this to : a native English speaker for correction, clearly not done. Unless the paper is : written in correct English, I regret that I shall be obliged to reject it. : Please note that I cannot keep asking for the same corrections again and again. : This must be my final request for revision. : 老师的看法和版上的大大一样, 不太相信外面的编译社, 我深怕下一次没稿好就要被gg了, : 英国人, 我真是猜不透你呀. 最後贴一贴abstract伤大家的眼睛>Q<. : This study investigates electrochemical passive properties of AlxCoCrFeNi : alloys in sulfuric acids in 20 oC - 65 oC by means of the potentiodynamic : polarization, EIS, and immersion weight loss tests. Although pre-exponential : factor, "A", and activation energy, Ea, in Icorr = A exp.Ea/RT, an Arrhenius : equation of corrosion current density, increase with increased Al content, : "A" is more important than Ea at temperatures higher than 27 oC. Al is : harmful to the corrosion resistance in sulfuric acid at temperatures higher : than 27 oC, owing to the inferior porous protection oxide film of Al in these : alloys. --

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