你的英文履历，我只看文法不看内容，错很多，格式也不是很容易阅读 整篇看起来的感觉会有点乱乱的，建议你再改改 还有，若是你拿这篇英文履历去跟面试，也告诉别人你的英文程度不错 老实说，会满..囧的 ^^" The ability to solve real world problem must to be integrated, so I attended ~~(不用to) different field of class to improve my well-rounded capability. In the class ~~~~~(classes) of Hi-tech Entrepreneurship and Operation, I learned the whole process of technique、market research、strategy analysis、IP planning、operating and 建议你把「、」改成「,」 financial planning by developing a new company. The most important is, I ~~ 典型的中式英文，请把,改成that learned to deal with my task with a macroscopic view to benefit my company, instead of only focusing on finishing my own assignments. ~~~~~~~~(改成focused,与learned对称) ※Read numerous of business cases and books. Also, to achieve my competence, I read numerous cases and books, because they ~~~~(also可做连接词,但是在正式的英文中,从来不会这麽使用,建议你用Besides, ~~~~ moreover..之类的字) 建议你不要用they,毕竟你是想强调你这样努力的成果或是这样的经验 而非cases and books make more close to real operation of a company. I will try to assume I were ~~~~~~~~~~(典型的中式英文,请改成closer) ~that不可省 the person who face problems and ask myself what I would do. ~~~~(faces) ~~~~~~~~~~(asks) Skill & Ability 1. Committed team work 2. Performing well in challenging and fast moving environment 3. Proficiency in Word, Excel（include function、analysis）, Outlook, PowerPoint 4. Fluent in English Experience of group work 1. President of NTU continent group, holding several symposiums、student union policy debate、book exhibition…etc. For me, they are a series good trainings of management& leadership、resources ~~~(to) ~~~~(these exps) ^(of) ~(and) allocation、analysis and arrangement an. Furthermore, I earned the soft ability such as communication、cooperation and working under pressure. ~~~~~~~(abilities 因为你後面的such as说一堆) 2. Involved in AIESEC program that negotiate with domestic companies（ ~~~~~~~~~(negotiated) responsible for ADVANTECH研华科技） to match foreign trainee working in Taiwan company. I learned to report and convincing my customers. ^(to)~~~~~~~~~~(convince) 3. NTU Seed educating group. Planning a summer camp and being a teacher. Work experience: 1. Ministry of Foreign Affairs APEC youth representative selection conference staff 2. National Tsing Hua University（清华大学） research program—Collecting information of solar energy. 3. Several translating experiences of English to Chinese. Conclusion The most important point of my view of learning is integration, but it’s base on my financial training. The trainings of finance department make me ~~~~(based) ~~~~(made) more sensitive of number, and so that I tend to focus on concrete evidence ~~(to) ~~~~~(删掉) and logic deduction, doing my best to choose moderate tool to solve the ~~~~~~~(and do) ~~~~(tools) ~~~ problem. ~~~~~~~(any problems) --

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