※ 引述《siukei (异乡人)》之铭言： : National Taiwan University Wind Band : The NTU Wind Band, currently one of the most ?? clubs in the National : University, was founded on November 25, 1954 by a group of music-loving How about "the most active"? 又 是不是少了"Taiwan"一字呀, I mean National "Taiwan" University... : In the early days, concerts were held regularly when we were still a : marching band. We then started the tradition of "Night of Chamber Music" 应该没有所谓"开始传统"吧!? 怪怪的耶... 室内乐之夜翻Concert of Chamber Music是不是就可以啦~ : in 1986. In 1988, our office was moved to the Second Student Activity : Center, where members can enjoy better facilities for practice. : Besides the "Night of Chamber Music", we also have a regular concert at : the end of each semester. 这边应该是翻译的问题吧 前面说in the early days会定期举办 现在也说有定期举办 那不如说 从当初开始就定期举办 就好啦... : Every once in a while, we hold tour performances during summer vacations. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 就说举办过或到过哪些地方办巡回吧 加了这句读起来也怪怪的... : Furthermore, we perform in different campus activities, hospital charity : concerts, and schools. Which is why, we, the NTU Wind Band, is called : one of the most active clubs in NTU. ^^^^^^ ㄟ 原来在这里出现了 真歹势~ 又 应该是That is why吧!? Which当肯定句主词好像... : In the past few years, we participated in various music activies: the ^^^^^^^^activitites : International Wind Band Festival held in Chai-Yi; the Asian Pacific Wind : Festial held in Hong Hong and Chai-Yi in 1996 and 2000 respectively. ^^^^ Kong 挑两个小错 :D : In order to help our members improve their techniques of performing, : besides regular practices each week, we hold a music camp every winter break. 嗯啊 Besides regular practice each week, we hold .... to improve our members... 这样好像比较顺...不然又像中式英文喔~ : We also have outstanding performances at the National Wind Band Contest, : from 1987 onwards, we were granted the excellent/good grade for 14 : continuous years. In 2000, we even won the first prize. 降好像只有2000年拿过第一名 :~ : Although none of us are majoring in music, we have great interest and hold 这里用进行式怪怪的耶... ^ 加s? : deep passion in music making. We hope to provide everyone with pleasure ^^^^^^^^^^^^ What is "music making"? How about "playing music"... : and inspiration with our music. -- 个人浅见啦 不一定对... ㄟ 中文版本原来长怎样啊? -- ※ 编辑: chaconne 来自: 140.109.203.189 (12/25 16:08)