※ [本文转录自 bestken77 信箱] 作者: [email protected] ([email protected]) 标题: Re: [吐司] C2speech-Oops I Did It Again 时间: Sun Mar 22 09:43:01 2009 作者: bestken77 (铮绿去冰) 看板: survivor 标题: Re: [吐司] C2speech-Oops I Did It Again 时间: Sat Mar 21 19:44:40 2009 以下是Ken Wang就甘心的 Evaluation ： Evaluation for Ken Huang’s C2 speech At first, I was attracted by your speech title! A good speech title will make others wonder what you're going to say. They will expect your speech and it's a kind of promotion(since I the PRVP XD). I will divide it into several parts as the following: Advantages: 1.Facial expression: since you're a funny person, it’s very easy for you to do it well. 2.Smile:always on your face!! When you talk about me, all of the members wear smile on their face= = 3.Context: close to the speech title, it would be better if it's your C1 speech. 4.Specialty:costantly interacting with the audience, especially put me fully in your speech. 5.No nervousness: I believe you practice it many times. I can see your confidence from your C2 speech. Room for improvements: 1.Eye contact: Today, our audience was divided into three parts, right, middle and left. If you see in their eyes for a while, they will feel that you're talking to them individually.(It can show your confidence as well!) 2.Voice: Because I can't hear clearly in the back of the classroom, I think you can make your voice louder. 3.Stance: Only one position. It would be better for you to move closer to me while talking about me. And you can stand closer to the audience as well. 4.Speed: Nervousness makes you increase your speed, maybe some pause, vocal variety would be better. 5.Pronunciation(咬字): clearer pronunciation can enhance your speech value. Maybe listen to CNN radio to learn the pronunciation. I'm looking forward to your C3 speech, we can see a great progress in your speech.You encourage me to get my C3 speech well-prepared, thanks^^” Last but not least, it costs $1,000 to call my name from now on.XD Ken Wang --

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