作者chanichen66 (转一圈)
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标题Re: 今天的比赛~~
时间Sun Oct 14 22:16:44 2007
我是今天去当timer的Alan
po一下我的感想:
今天的比赛真的很精彩,
大家都非常「敢」讲,
虽然英文不怎麽流利、
发音不怎麽正确,
但是这些都没有关系,
最重要的是我有十足的勇气。
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我相信大家都是花了很多时间在准备这场比赛,
Tina Cathy Ivy Lisa都是万中选一的高手,
你们在台上的表现都让我由衷地佩服,
也让我学到了很多的东西,
恭禧Tina Ivy 和Lisa.
You all are wonderful.
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Cathy, you really delivered a great speech.
Your content is very good and you also used
your body language.Being the first one makes
all the speaker nervous but you were very
confident.That is great.
But I want to give my humble suggestions:
The first one--eye contact, as the test
speaker,you seemed to stare at Sue only.
There are still other audiences listening
your speech, so you could turn your head or
shift your eyes toward the other person.
Let them know you care of them.
Then your tone was too flat.When you were
saying something interesting, you did not
exaggerate the part.Therefore, the audiences
would not feel it very funny.
Third, the strength is a bit weak.I guess
someone sitting far form you would not listen
very clearly and this made your speech less
attracting.If you adjust the position of
microphone, it would be better.
Last, one of the evaluators had mentioned,"
Never change the title till you are on the podium "
You should tell Cindy before you went to the podium
and it will make your speech more smoothly.
I am looking for your next speech.
Congratulation.
(第一次自己写这种东西,如果有不对的地方,请大家告诉我)
Thank you
TM真的是一个从参与就可以学到东西的社团.
谢谢大家
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1F:推 coldgoddess:Alan很棒~~ 10/14 22:35
2F:推 Cathytung:Thanks, i also learn a lot from you~~ 10/15 10:19