※ 引述《o90202 (o90202)》之铭言： : ※ 引述《emfh (KFC爷爷的鸡腿)》之铭言： : : (2) : : 4. Because whales and dolphins live in the water, they look like fish. : 这句没因果。 Whales and dolphins live in the water, and they look like fish. 这样不知道欧科不欧科!? 感觉跟第三句会很像... : : (3) : : 6. Having much research done on whales during the past ten or fifteen years, : : we now know more about how these mammoth sea creatures live. : 不确定这样改对不对。 我觉得OK! : : (4) : : 6. Able to grow to a length of nearly 100 feet, blue whales are the largest : : mammals ever to have lived on the earth. : 不确定这样改对不对。 : 我是倾向： : The largest mammals ever to have lived on the earth, blue whales are able to : grow to a length of nearly 100 feet. 我觉得两句都可以!XD 欧拉写得比较顺(就文意而言!) 就用欧拉的用法吧!嗯! : : (5) : : 6. Humpback whales seen fairly close to the shores of New England, : : whale-watching trips to sight them are big business. : : 7. Whale-watching trips to sight the humpback whales which can be seen fairly : : close to the shores of New England are big business. : 不确定这样改对不对。 对吧!只是which......那个子句真的很长...= =a : : (6) : : 5. There the whale-calves being born, the gray whale migrates annually from : : its Arctic feeding grounds to the warm waters off Baja California. : 不确定这样改对不对。 The gray whale migrates annually from its Arctic feeding grounds to the warm waters off Baja California, there the whale-calves being born. (感觉跟没改一样...科科!OTZ) : 我不确定这几句能不能这样写。　囧 : 缴交期限是明天中午，如果之後没有人再更正的话， : 我明天一大早把这几句删掉以後就寄出去好了？ 辛苦两位大大了!<(_ _)> 欧拉你还记得我们的组员有哪几个吧! 欧拉 函璇 林阿蛋 傅乔木 陈冠宇 阿铭铭 千铃... 应该是这样了!XDD 少了谁也想不到了...哭哭 --

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