※ 引述《emfh (KFC爷爷的鸡腿)》之铭言： : (2) : 4. Because whales and dolphins live in the water, they look like fish. 这句没因果。 : (3) : 6. Having much research done on whales during the past ten or fifteen years, : we now know more about how these mammoth sea creatures live. 不确定这样改对不对。 : (4) : 6. Able to grow to a length of nearly 100 feet, blue whales are the largest : mammals ever to have lived on the earth. 不确定这样改对不对。 我是倾向： The largest mammals ever to have lived on the earth, Blue whales are able to grow to a length of nearly 100 feet. : (5) : 6. Humpback whales seen fairly close to the shores of New England, : whale-watching trips to sight them are big business. : 7. Whale-watching trips to sight the humpback whales which can be seen fairly : close to the shores of New England are big business. 不确定这样改对不对。 : (6) : 5. There the whale-calves being born, the gray whale migrates annually from : its Arctic feeding grounds to the warm waters off Baja California. 不确定这样改对不对。 我不确定这几句能不能这样写。　囧 缴交期限是明天中午，如果之後没有人再更正的话， 我明天一大早把这几句删掉以後就寄出去好了？ --

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