※ 引述《Weikm (QQkm)》之铭言： 这篇是垃圾 可以跳过 我认真了 : ※ 引述《castoo (布丁)》之铭言： : : Whatever I try, the gel still can't appear. : 无论我怎麽去试，凝胶态仍然是没有办法出现 : : I don't know what is happened, maybe gel doesn't like me. : 我不知道发生了甚麽，或许是凝胶态不喜欢我吧 I don't know what happened, and maybe gel doesn't like me. happen的用法应该不必要用到被动 他应该是 "sth happened" 这样的用法 且他不能用人来当主词 只能用事情当主词!! 且不能 sth happen 因为 他已经发生了 不能用现在式 当然如果前面有助动词例外罗! maybe前面，应该加个连接辞比较好吧!? : : If gel still won't appear, I would do the experiment all the time until : 如果凝胶态仍然无法出现，我将得作持续做到它出现为止 : : the gel appears, otherwise I would change direction of the experiment, : 否则我就得改变我的实验方向 : : worst of all I would study the third grade. : 最糟的状况就是我将要念第三年硕班 and the worst of all.... 连接词在英文中很重要 ㄎㄎ 且 worst最高级前记得要加定冠词 the 喔 揪咪 ^,< : : J.J Ruan always gives me a lot of experiment to do, I believe that not me : 软趴趴总是给我好多好多的实验得作，我相信不只我一个人 我印象中 not only .... but also....的句型 只有also可以省略吧!! I believe that not only me but (also) the others have to do..... : : but the others also have to do the same thing, but I think if I do it which : 必须这样子 但我想如果我以这不确定正确的实验方法作下去 这句怪怪的@"@ but I think if I do which have no exact experimental method... : : have no exact experimen method, how will I get the achievement from it？ : 我要如何从实验中得到成就!? how could I get... 前面用if 假设语气 应该不能用will 要用 would 或者 could 敝人又觉得could比较合乎宅宅那种无奈又无力的心情!! XD : : Pro. Ruan often imputes the experiment failure to me, but he forgets that : 软趴趴常常把实验失败归咎於我 但他忘记 experimental failure ... experiment是不可数名词或者不及物动词吧 : : besides my problem he also has some problem from my research, and he sometimes : 在我的问题之外也有部分问题是来自於他 且他偶尔 from这个介系词怪怪的 是不是用in比较好呢!? : : even likes say some unpleasant words about me. I really can't tolerate it. : 甚至会说一些让我不开心的话 我真的不能容忍他 likes to 或者 likes Ving 两个语气上又不一样 我觉得老师适合用後者 因为他不是"喜欢去怎样怎样" 而是"已经喜欢上作这件事"　XDD : : Oh, who can help me？ : 喔~~~~~谁可以救救我!!!!!?????? 我承认我只是在骗P币而已 有错误请鞭小力点 XDD --

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