作者TeaUk (饮茶)
看板Metal_kids
标题[讨论] 口是心非--如果你要离开我 (英)
时间Sat Sep 15 22:33:39 2012
近日着了魔般在睡前反覆听「口是心非」这张专辑。
反覆听着曲的层次，反覆读着词本的意境，只为了能更理解这张
最後的故事，试着将自己的理解翻作英文让朋友也能认识他与它
。
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如果你要离开我 If You Leave Me...
词/曲: 张雨生 Lyric/ Compositon by Chang Yu-Shen
Translation:
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如果你要离开我 我想我不会太难过
也许有一点点难过 至少不会在你的面前难过
如果你要离开我 如果你要离开我 如果你要离开我
如果你要
If you're leaving me, I won't be sad deeply.
Maybe, it's kind of heart-breaking, but I won't let you notice it.
If you're leaving me, if you're leaving me, if you're going to leave...
If you will...
如果你要离开我 你不用对我说什麽
就算我真的很心痛 至少脸上还挂着一幅笑容
如果你要离开我 如果你要离开我
如果你要离开我 如果你要
Leave me alone
If you're leaving me, please don't don't~ say any words.
My heart hurts so badly, but I'll keep smile to your face.
If you're leaving me, if you're leaving me, if you're going to leave...
If you will...
Leave me alone.
如果你要离开我 世界还是会向前走
也许它慢慢改变我 至少改变也不是坏的结果
If you're leaving me, the earth will keep rotating.
Maybe, the time will change me gradually; not bad to be different
from before.
如果你要离开我 如果你要离开我
如果你要离开 请别到最後一刻才告诉我
If you're leaving me alone... If you're leaving...
If you're going to leave...
Please don't tell me at the last moment.
Leave me alone.
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※ 编辑: TeaUk 来自: 114.46.18.130 (09/15 22:34)
1F：推 CaCaEgg:好像alone拿掉 me跟-ly结尾单字就可以押韵了 会更顺 09/16 00:39
2F：→ CaCaEgg:一些拙见 参考参考 09/16 00:39
3F：推 rainborn8228:我好需要有人帮忙中翻英这整张专辑！真是太感谢了！ 09/16 00:46
4F：→ TeaUk:谢谢CaCaEgg的建议 09/16 11:43
※ 编辑: TeaUk 来自: 114.46.26.218 (09/16 12:05)
5F：→ TeaUk:going around the sun换成rotating; gradualy修为in gradual 09/16 13:10
6F：→ TeaUk:印象中in +形容词的用法可以当作句尾副词 @@? 09/16 13:11
7F：推 CaCaEgg:会不会原本gradualy比较好？ 09/18 01:13
8F：→ CaCaEgg:因为歌词原本四句结尾是 "我、过、过、过" 09/18 01:14
※ 编辑: TeaUk 来自: 114.46.19.116 (10/18 19:29)
9F：→ TeaUk:改好了！要依原歌词顺序做对照，这样大家唱起来有比较顺吧？ 10/18 19:30
※ 编辑: TeaUk 来自: 114.46.26.99 (10/31 21:05)