作者chunnone ()
看板Language
标题[句子] 改写 it is ... that 句型
时间Thu Jun 26 22:47:24 2008
Compared to the digital camera, the way traditional camera develops pictures
and the maintenance of its pictures is less easy.
这句 要怎麽改成 分裂句 强调句型呢?
因为这句子 一看就觉得头太重 是典型的头重脚轻句型
在英文写作中算不上好句子 所以 我才想改写他 无奈却遇到瓶颈
我试着写成
it is less easy for? the way traditional camera develops pictures
and the maintenance of its pictures.
or
The way traditional camera develops pictures and the maintenance of
its pictures is less easy than those of digital camera.
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