我试试 ※ 引述《chunnone ()》之铭言： : Moreover, it(money) even corresponds to the codeword of many attracting and : beautiful things that men pursue. : 甚至，钱等同於许多人们所追求的诱人的美丽的事物的代名词。 : Q1: "codeword" 这个字这样使用好吗? 还是有更好的说法? : Q2: correspond to 如此使用对吗? 我可能会说 Moreover, it has become a name that stands for numerous attractive things that people pursue. : The influence of money is far from/ beyond our imaginations. : 金钱的影响力远超过人们的想像。 : Q3: far from 跟 beyond 哪个好呢? 还是都可以?? 我会说 The power of money is far beyond our imagination. : The problem is: you cannot almost do anything without the support of it. : 问题是: 没有它(钱)的支持你几乎无法做任何事。 : Q4: 这句话这样写OK吗? 因为用了很多否定字，是否会造成语意不清呢? The problem is: you can hardly do anything without it. : Q5:以下两句，何者更适用於正式写作? : PS: 我个人是觉得第一句有些罗嗦，第二句则不确定文法是不是完全正确 : They contribute to highlight the parts that cannont gain by the force of money. : or 写成 They contribute to highlight the parts that beyond money's reach. 第一句的文法不对，第二句OK : 紧接着下一句 : ... by the force of money；for example, the sincere relationships among : people, an individual life,(and)especially for the flying time. : Q6: for example 的使用 有错吗? 还有especially 的使用对吗? and 要加吗? : 这是我容易错的地方，所以不太有信心自己是不是用对 : 以上，拜托大家帮我看看<(_ _)> : 有先查过用法了 不过造句後的结果 不确定是否也正确 : 请大家提点 指引 我的改法： ...money's reach, such as the genuine relationships among people, the (why individual? it can be "spiritual" or something) life, and of course, the time. (or the elusive time / the flying time will do, too) 供您参考 --

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