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标题[心得] 戴尔美语练功坊 雅思图表写作解析 (8/13)
时间Tue Aug 13 20:26:04 2013
戴尔美语练功坊 雅思图表写作解析(8/10日)
图表写作: Line Graph
IELTS -Writing
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows the unemployment figures (as percentages of the
population available for work) for two British cities and the average
unemployment figures for Great Britain over the period 1992 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
The line graph demonstrates the unemployment figures for Liverpool,
London, and Great Britain during the period, from 1992 to 2000.
The figure for Liverpool remained stable at 6% for 1992 and 1993,
before increasing sharply over the next 2 years to 15 %. It then declined
to 8 % in 1999. The drop was marked from 1995 (15 %) to 1997 (10 %),
but less so from 1997 to 1999. At the end of the period, the figure again
rose considerably to 11 %.
In London, the figure commenced at the same level as Liverpool's
(6 %), but afterwards never surpassed that of Liverpool. In 1993 and
1994 the figure was 4 %, followed by a slight increase to 7 % in 1996.
Thereafter, there was a moderate decline to 3 % in 1998. The figure
remained steady at this level in 1999, before doubling to 6 % in 2000.
Concerning the average unemployment rate for Great Britain, it
began at 7 % in 1992 and fell to 5 % in 1994. Then the figure climbed
in 1995, back to 7 %, the identical level of the year 1992, and remained
at that level in 1996. Between 1996 and 1999, the unemployment figure
dropped gradually to 4 %, prior to hiking slightly to 5 % in 2000.
From these figures, we can observe that the unemployment trend was
similar for the two cities and Great Britain as a whole. Nevertheless, the
figures for London and Liverpool fluctuated more than the figures for
Great Britain. The unemployment figures for Liverpool substantially
transcended the others.
曲线图写作相关词与句型 :
1. demonstrate (显示) = display = manifest = exhibit = show
2. The line graph manifests / demonstrates / displays / exhibits / shows
/ indicates / outlines / illustrates upward / downward trend
(上扬/ 下降趋势)
3. The numbers /rates /percentages / figures of … (rise / increase / hike
/ climb / grow / escalate / shoot up / mount up / go up) (数字/比率上升)
4. The numbers /rates /percentages / figures of … (soar / skyrocket
/ surge / boom ) (数字/比率急升)
5. The numbers /rates /percentages / figures of … reduce / decrease
/ fall / drop / decline / dip / go down (数字/比率下滑)
6. The numbers /rates /percentages / figures of … slump / plummet
/ plunge / tumble (数字/比率猛跌)
7. remain constant / remain stable / stay constant / level out / level off
/ stabilize (数字/比率维持不变)
8. considerably = sizably = substantially = sharply = steeply =
dramatically = enormously = immensely (剧烈地/ 大幅地)
9. moderately / steadily / constantly / gently / gradually / slightly / mildly (温和地/ 缓和地)
10. identical level = the same level (相同水准)
11. fluctuate (波动) fluctuation = mutation (变化)
12. The figures / numbers reach the (peak /plateau / height / apex / acme
/ summit / zenith / pinnacle / highest point), at ….
= The figures / numbers peak at / plateau at ……数据达到最高点)
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