感谢大家的支持(._.) 没想到一个考了五次才站上7分的心得文也能拥有这麽多回响 囧 还有雪片般飞来的信件(大家也太热情了吧) 虽然之前说在下快被工作跟居妹特压死(真的是事实没错) 但我深刻能明白那种还在雅思苦海中载浮载沉挣扎的煎熬心情!!! (自认为还算满坚强的在下 在工作上无论压力再大天天被客户骂被老板钉 为了生活压力考试工作两头烧 都没想哭过 在拿到第四次ielts成绩时 竟然不争气地落下几滴泪来 囧!!!.....) 所以刚处理完一堆杂事 还是来分享一下其他心得好了(如果大家不嫌弃的话orz) 希望能对大家有一丁点点点的小帮助@@ --------------------------以上落落长前言分隔线------------------------------- 除了speaking之外 我想我接下来第二稳定的就是writing吧(?) 我的writing从头到尾实际练习的篇数大概只有10篇不到吧(包括大小作文) 但分数大多在6.5 或到7左右(整个投资报酬率很高 l_l) 不过我每一篇写完後都很透彻得分析自己的架构和逻辑 整理出一套自己最好的模版 自此之後 我其实每次考试前都只有看自己的整理笔记 对於Ielts的作文(尤其是Task2)我觉得是 七分架构，二分想法和句型，一分单字 也就是比起写出一堆艰深单字和堆凑起来 但叙述想法时的逻辑跳来跳去、毫无结构的文章 还不如用歪果仁最熟悉 让他们读起来最没负担 一下就能知道你想表达的重点是什麽的作文架构切入 然後几个好的单字跟小小句型变化只是最後蛋糕上的点缀而已 在考试来说 我通常都只写四段 四段的结构分别如下: Introduction 正面论点(先带出另一种普遍的事实或某一群人的看法，我通常写自己支持方向的反向) 反面论点(自己真正支持的方向) 结论 架构范例: (前言...) some people believe that...while many others hold opposit view, First of all, there is no doubt that (写某些人的看法) However, on the other hand, (带出自己真正的中心思想) In Conclusion, 实际范例(附上我自己练习时的拙作): Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the past few decades, the refinement in technology and science has evidently altered our lives, especially ones related to transportation. Nevertheless, whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate among the public since some people believe that raising the price of petrol is the best way to ease traffic and pollution problems while many others hold opposite view. First of all, (点出本段topic sentence) it is reasonable and understandable that increasing the price of patrol will directly decrease people's willingness of driving (延伸说明) since it will raise their burden financially while they drive their private vehicles to transport. (实际举例) For example, many white-color workers need to commute between two different cities during the weekdays by driving their own cars and it may probably shorten their wages in form of raising their financial loadings in driving cost. As a result, people will try their best to find out an alternative way to commute in that situation. However, it is not the best solution to tackle with the problems in traffic and pollution since it simply cures the symptoms, not the disease. (提出本段topic sentence-我通常写自己真正的立场) The best solution in my opinion is to construct fundamental infrastructure, (延伸说明) more specifically, to build up a more comprehensive transportation system for the public. (实际举例) For instance, a comprehensive underground network, a high speed railway system, and a well-organized buses routes, including various vans and shuttle buses, will be a significant attraction to the public passengers since taking the convenient public transportation will definetely save both time and money in looking for parking spaces, maintaining the vehicle parts, and purchasing the high price petrol as well. By way of conclusion, although it is indeed an effective way to managing the traffic and pollution problems by raising the petrol price and restraining the private cars usage, it is simply a temporary solution in the current stage Constructing a more comprehensive public transportation system will be a better solution in the long term. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 大概是这个样子 其实我写作文时很少用到什麽高深的单字 但一定要做到结构清晰 让读的人一下就能抓到你的行文结构和中心思想 尽量做到让考官看你的文章时 可以简单明了 无痛阅读 如以做到这一点 分数也就差不到那去了吧(至少一定不会成为扯你後腿的科目) 另外 虽然很多人会说考试时时间太少 写大纲根本浪费时间 关於这点 我是持相反立场的 我每一场考试 都一定会写大纲(确保中间不会写一写离题) 而且最後也至少都能剩10分钟以上检查两篇作文 关於我考writing时的策略如下: (1) 一定先写下大纲！ 写下各段基本论点及预计发展方向 不要离题 甚至可圈出主语提醒自己 (如题目是在「儿童」和「使用电脑」上 不小心写到「成人使用电脑」就会离题) (2) 提出thesis->进一步说明thesis的概念->举例->details 很多时候作文的分数不高 是因为立论模糊 缺少举例 比方只有一堆空泛的形容词和个人意见 缺乏例证和客观环境考量 (3) One paragraph, One idea! 这句不是我讲的 是之前一个专门教授作文的考官讲的@@ 很多人会苦恼於写作文时题材不够 但其实每篇作文基本上只要一个正面论点跟一个反面论点就很足够啦 因为每段一开始的主旨句在下的时候就限定了本段论辩的范围 写超过主旨句提到的概念 其实这段就算离题了 除非你主旨句是写"overuse computers有很多坏处" 接下来就可以一一举例 (但采用这种结构要小心整段都在举一堆例 却没有充份延展、说明的问题) 否则主旨句写"过份使用电脑会导致人们对於电脑太过依赖" 同一段写着写着又提出 "而且会引起很多生理上的疾病" 这样主旨就没包到全段拉 囧 (4) Nature！ 文句尽量以自然为主 不追求艰深抝口的难句 可多变换同义字(EX: expert, specialist, professional…) 多变换句子结构(Ex: 名词说法改动词 动态说法改名词) "我私以为"英文还满喜欢使用後谓修饰语的 多使用限定子句(,which ,to a certain degree,)补充说明 及多加限定adv/adj (currently, definitely, considerably, overwhelming.etc) 来增加句子具体程度和意境 但一切还是以看起来舒服自然为主 单字只要偶尔穿插几个不错的画龙点睛一下即可 (EX:plight, indispensable, compromise, prolong someone's life…etc) 再次强调 我每场考试都会写下大纲 大纲写下来不会超过10个字 其实花不了你多少时间 却可时时刻刻提醒你扣紧主轴 让你在文章还没出发前 就已经画清楚本次的旅游路线图了 我还满常在刚拿到题目时 不知道该写啥 如果可以顺着顺序一段一段写下来 当然最好 但是中间如果卡关时 时间就会一分一秒的过去了... 所以在写下大纲 清楚掌握这次的方向之後 如果我写几句第二段写得卡卡的 我会先跳写到第三段 第三段如果还是卡卡的 就写一写再跳到结论 把结论先写完 至少这样「开头->正面->反面->结论」的骨架都先出来了 最後只是慢慢再把文章的血肉填进去 整体的结构就不会愈写愈偏了~ (我用这种骨血肉的作法 有次竟然还拿到7 囧!! 明明那次过程写得超不顺orz...) 最後附上我自己整理的一些经典好用句型 给大家参考一下吧 1.Sth. leaves much to be desired 还有许多待改进之处 (我在problem/solve题型 写结论的必用句) 2.Constitute an essential part of my life (用以取代play an important role这老梗句) 3.Play an indispensible role in 不可或缺的角色 4.Sth. is inevitable 无可避免的 5.Unshirkable responsibility of sb. 无法逃避的责任 undertake responsibility 承担责任 6.Primary reason / Primary cause 主要原因 7.Pose a great threat to 产生威胁 8.It is conceivable that 可想而知 (它的好朋友是It is understandable/It is reasonable/There is no doubt...) 9.It pays to 做...是值得的 10.Spare no effort to 不遗余力 11.be closely/highly related to 与...息息相关 12.Get into the habit of... = make it a rule to... 养成...的习惯 13.enable sb. to do something... 使...能够 14.On no account can we...我们绝对不能... 15.be superior to be inferior to be not inferior to 不亚於(<-一听就很有层次感XD) 16.be forced / compelled / obliged to 不得不 17.Do one's utmost to...尽最大努力 (取代do one's best) 18.does good to 对...有好处 does harm to 造成伤害 19.hold the edge in... = dominant 占优势的 20.take advantage of 1.利用 2.占便宜 --

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