虽然去补了某家知名的雅思补习班 但英文作文还是一直无法突破 (我认真写和随便写的分数居然都差不多 老师上课常常用"google it" "I'm not sure" 带过问题.....) 我英文程度应该还算OK TOEIC没怎麽准备去考也有800分 但是每次作文都被批改的只有5.5分左右 我现在渐渐的越来越丧失信心 想试着换个补习班改改看作文 不知道有没有推荐的地方 或是有好心的版友可以帮我看看问题到底出在哪.... ================================================== 题目:People think that building should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings. Do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings to us? With the rapid economic development, great deals of regions are confronted with a renewal program, and are building modern structures to replace older ones. Some people might consider it is too rude to these historical structures, and others regard it as an opportunity of social development. This essay will elaborate the merits and drawback of the debate. Some individuals claim that aged structures should be protected for the following reasons. First, constructions are symbols of life experience of the local area. A large number of historical buildings should be preserved but not destroyed. In contemporary world, due to globalization, the regional features are replaced with the prevalent western culture gradually. The aged buildings play vital roles in establishing variation among architectures. In contrast, people might hold different opinion that the conservation of aged structures is expensive and that is difficult to find the master of traditional repairing skills. As far as I am concerned, the maintance of traditional constructions might produce severe stress on governments’ budget. Moreover, partly historical structures are located in the commercial regions and traffic lines. If the authorities only take traditional conservation into account, without regard to practical efficiency; manpower and resources will be wasted. Based on all factors offered above, whether a aging construction should be removed to build a new one is a question that may be answered on a case-by-case basis. People involved should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of the issue before reaching a conclusion. ========================================================================= 以上~感谢~ --

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