网志好读版 http://siw.pixnet.net/blog/post/37903769 考完之後很人问我writing要怎麽写 一直重复说的後遗症就是,常常忘记自己说过甚麽~(．＿．?) 所以整理了一篇完整的,免得又遗漏了让别人误会我藏暗步~(￣ー￣；) === 基本架构 === 根据练习的经验,agree/disagree的题型最为频繁 (总而言之就是正反两方这种,不一定明 问你agree or disagree) 所以我在这以此题型为例 (1) introduction 引言 背景描述-->连接词/句型-->问题 (2) counter opinion 反方立场 想法-->解释-->举例 (想法和解释是可以对调的) (3) writer’s opinion 作者立场 连结反方意见-->想法-->解释-->举例 (4) conclusion 结论 强调作者立场/解决方案 其他题型如cause/effect, 就可能依个人调整,但也差不多。 (1) 同上 (2) cause --> effect --> 举例 (cause/effect的例子皆可) (3) 同(2) (4) solution 其实也可以cause都放在(2), effect都放在(3), 但两个都一定要举例。 至於举甚麽例子~? 乱掰 !!! 胡诌个数据不是难事~XD I mean it !! 谜之音: 唉~真是为了分数不择手段阿~ˋ(′_‵||)ˊ === 范文 === 考完11/15和11/29後Simon都要我写一篇那天考题的writing给他,我只留了11/29的,也刚 好这是我最高分的一次(7.5),所以就以这篇为例吧。里面很多的句型/片语/连接词等都是 我惯用的,也就是我所称的”自己的模板”,建议大家也找出自己的模版喔。此外,单字尽 量不要重覆,背很多的同义字是一定要的啦。 为阅读方便,最底下有没有画线补充的完整版,欢迎享用。 说明 (红色) -- 基本架构 (绿色) -- 一般说明 (粉色) -- 自己的惯用句型模板 TOPIC Some people think modern children’s games do not help children to develop a range of skills. They say that traditional games are much better for developing children’s skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree. (背景描述) Over past few decades, sophisticated technology has altered the methods that children play games. (连接句型) However, there are a lot of different opinions on the question of (普通单字的写法) there are a variety of diverse positions on the issue of (替换高分单字) (题出问题) whether or not modern games can help young people to develop their skills. First of all, (连接词) from some people’s perspective, (反方想法) games with high technology are beneficial for children to learn a wide range of skills, (解释)owing to the fact that (连接词) there are abundant pictures and sounds in modern games which stimulate them to be more creative. (举例)To illustrate this point, (连接词) according to a recent report of a newspaper, students who played games well such as computer or online games usually got better score than others in several subjects, and they were particularly good at communication. Perhaps, it is positive in some aspects. (承接反方意见) Nevertheless, (连接词) in others’ opinion, (解释) there are not numerous materials in an old one, while young people need to create and invent things or rules for it, and that enable them to learn how to resolve problems if confronted difficulties; consequently, (连接词) (作者意见) traditional games are better for the development of children’s skills. (举例) For instance, (连接词) an article in an economic magazine indicates that seniors who grow up with playing traditional games are usually not afraid encountering challenge and willing to defeat it. On the other hand, juniors living in a modern society tend to give up more easily when they face a difficulty that they have never meet before. In other words, nowadays, most young people do not like to broaden capability of new skills. By way of conclusion,(连接词) (强调作者意见) I intend to argue that even thought traditional games seems obsolete, they are much better for children to develop a wide range of skills. === 原文好读版 === Over past few decades, sophisticated technology has altered the methods that children play games. However, there are a variety of diverse positions on the issue of whether or not modern games can help young people to develop their skills. First of all, from some people’s perspective, games with high technology are beneficial for children to learn a wide range of skills, owing to the fact that there are abundant pictures and sounds in modern games which stimulate them to be more creative. To illustrate this point, according to a recent report of a newspaper, students who played games well such as computer or online games usually got better score than others in several subjects, and they were particularly good at communication. Perhaps, it is positive in some aspects. Nevertheless, in others’ opinion, traditional games are better for the development of children’s skills, because there are not numerous materials in an old one, while young people need to create and invent things or rules for it, and that enable them to learn how to resolve problems if confronted difficulties. For instance, an article in an economic magazine indicates that seniors who grow up with playing traditional games are usually not afraid encountering challenge and willing to defeat it. On the other hand, juniors living in a modern society tend to give up more easily when they face a difficulty that they have never meet before. In other words, nowadays, most young people do not like to broaden capability of new skills. By way of conclusion, I intend to argue that even thought traditional games seems obsolete, they are much better for children to develop a wide range of skills -- ~我只是喜欢随手乱画~XD~ http://www.wretch.cc/blog/sherrysiw --

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