※ 引述《neopunk (Angelic whisper)》之铭言： : The following is a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. : "As a local merchant, I wish to support the development of a ski resort : in the state park north of our township. Along with many other merchants : who favor the proposal by Ski the Slopes, Incorporated, I would, of : course, experience a growth in my business. But I also know how much more : prosperous, not to mention lively and interesting, our community would be : if tourism increased. Since the main opposition comes from a few : environmentalists* who do not even live in this community, I see no reason : to give in to their views. The First National Bank has finally researched : the project and agreed to fund it. As a result, I see no reason to delay : development of the resort." : *Environmentalists are people who advocate the preservation of the natural : environment. 1.滑雪场不一定能够振兴本地旅游业,考量因素太多,作者需要证明 2.环保团体尽管人数少,不住本地,但也不表示他们的反对无代表性 作者需要客观论述,而非主观论定不具代表 说不定不建滑雪场,经营生态旅游(ecotourism)还比较好 滑雪场不一定是最好的选择 3.银行同意赞助只能代表此投资银行自己有可图利的地方, 不代表对社区环境或利益无害 对於这个计划,银行所考量的因素作者要讲清楚,而不是一语带过, : 这一题想不太出来该怎麽反驳比较有力道 : 尤其是黄字部分的句子，实在不太了解他想表达的意思 : 那个转折用的but让我觉得好怪呀... : 可以请好心的版友给些解释和答题方向吗~~ : 非常感谢 :) 就是指让我投资滑雪场不只我有得赚, 社区也有的赚得意思 --

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