※ 引述《chiao999 (chiao)》之铭言： : 695 : By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were of dangerously experimental design. : Earned 是修饰record 不是应该要连在一起没逗点吗？ : 1. earned 前面没有逗点的话正确吗？ : 2. 改成以下分词子句正确吗？ : By 1940 aviation was still so new, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran, earning seventeen official national and international speed records at a time, flew many of the planes were of dangerously experimental design. 1. 可以，被动分词是可以修饰逗号前面的第一个名词 2. 我会先说，除非是明显的文法错误自己改正(像是主动词一致或时态) 否则自己改句子来讨论正确与否是没意义的 一来 GMAT SC 的答案有时不一定是在讨论正确性， 而是比较上来说哪个句意较佳 (且有时是 GMAC 说了算) 所以自己改句子来讨论 其实意义不大 不过回归原 po 所写，我们看以下正确句子: By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were of dangerously experimental design. 句意为: 1940 年， JC 有了 17 项正式的国际飞行纪录，这些纪录是在 飞行观念还在初始阶段，许多他飞行的飞机还是危险的实验机取得的纪录 (中文翻译不够好请见谅) 原 po 句子: By 1940 aviation was still so new, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran, earning seventeen official national and international speed records at a time, flew many of the planes were of dangerously experimental design 文法基本上应该有误: 1. 两个句子没连接词 2. flew 和 were 一句话有两个动词 句意为: 1940 年，飞行观念还在初始阶段，JC，取得了17项正式的国际飞行纪录， 使用了许多很危险的实验机做飞行 这样的句意会和本来想表达的正确句意有不小的差距 1. 原本正确答案使用 so that 连接了两个观念 aviation was so new --> planes were of dangerously...... 而原 po 的句子将这两个句子隔离太远，没有连接 2. 请注意核心句意尽可能 (但违反并不见得是错误) 用主要动词 (main verb) 表达 正确答案将取得正式纪录放入核心句 (held 17 records) 而这句也的确是这句话的核心观念 原 po 的句子将 "flew many planes" or "planes were of dangerously" 这两个其中一个当核心句 (因为两个动词我看不出哪一个是原 po 要表达的) 但不管是哪一个 相信都不是原句的核心句意 当然，(1) 取得 17 项飞行纪录，(2) 是用还是危险的实验机达成 这两个观念应该是相辅相成，强调这纪录的可贵 但我想比较上来说，飞行纪录还是核心句意 最後，我还是建议专心把 SC 的五个答案完整讨论出， 会比自己想其他可能性来的有效率许多 Donz GMAT: Ethan -- Donz GMAT 实力班: http://www.donzgmat.com/course-5weeks Donz GMAT FB: https://www.facebook.com/groups/DonzGMAT Donz 全科线上机经课: http://ndxica.pixnet.net/blog/post/41525434 --

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