作者pilichat (人生需要不断冒险)
看板GMAT
标题[语文] GWD-17-29
时间Mon Nov 16 17:40:49 2009
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was
unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered
by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and
criticizing these indignities.
A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing
B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing
C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized
E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of
请教一下C怎麽错?
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1F:推 webelieve:答案是D吗?! C的话是平行错吧~ 11/16 22:02
2F:→ webelieve:原句in its firsthand accounts (in +名词) 11/16 22:06
3F:→ webelieve:对等连接词後应该也用介系词+N比较好~ 11/16 22:07
4F:→ pilichat:但是功能相同的介词可省 11/16 23:06
5F:→ pilichat:正确答案是D没错!只是想知道C是有错~还是只是比较不好 11/16 23:10