作者pilichat (人生需要不断冒险)
看板GMAT
标题[语文] pp2-29
时间Mon Nov 2 20:04:33 2009
29。 Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal
point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the
business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most
popular attraction.
(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the
focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio
(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States,
which is no longer the focal point of urban life,in San Antonio the river
(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer
the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it
(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of
urban life, but the river in San Antonio
(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the
focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river
答案E.
请问B除了which就近指代United States错误,有其他错误吗?
which是允许跳跃修饰the river的,所以我很难只因为which就近指代这个指控就把他排除
还是说which离指代的对象太远了呢?
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1F:推 KGChen:个人意见後面改成the river in San Antonio会比较对比一点 11/02 22:28
2F:推 tootoobenee:Unlike A,B结构下, 主词马上接在逗号後面,不要在插入 11/02 22:35
3F:→ tootoobenee:介系词片语, 会让比较对象不明确, 这个老莫有说过. 11/02 22:36